Welcome to Platform 4(P4). P4 is a stepping stone for undefined musicians and
artists. It is run directly through Patrick Garry. He is a musician
and artist himself.
At P4, artists will be given opportunities like state of the art equipment, amazing work space, promotion to millions of social media viewers, and especially contact with other artists similar to them.
P4 is striving to put new music and other art forms into the
minds of the public. P4 is for all types of artists and avenues of entertainment. It can be thought of as a "hub" or "home base" for rising talent and aspiring individuals. It's main purpose is networking and promotion.
~PGarry
Assignment: Blog Posting 1: Provide a one to two paragraph summary or explanation of your business, Platform.4.
ReplyDeleteThe feel of the blog is "artsy" to me, which achieves its intended purpose. Both the wine/burgundy/maroon color and the font type of the business title sets the stage (pun intended). The background is visually appealing. The font size is a bit small, which may make it hard for some to read.
I love the catchy post title Blank Canvas Hub. The first post shares that P4 is a studio / networking environment offering equipment and work space to aspiring artists and is a hub for artists to meet, collaborate, and be exposed to millions of social media viewers. I think there could have been a bit more explanation of the story or how this will work, but it's headed in the right direction.
Referring to the SMM Blog Rubric -- PGarry's post was timely. He used examples (his own interest in art). Readers have an idea of who he is as an artist. There is visual appeal (small font). I look forward to seeing his logo. From a stylistics stand point, correct "It's" to read Its. The language used in the About Me and the first post connects well with the topic and should be relatable to future followers. . ."stepping stone," "hub," and "undefined."
The About Me section is informative . . .Patrick has shared some details about who he is as an artist.
How about including an cool graphic or picture?
25/30 TAH